When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Centres of attraction as well as public amenities are essential for the society as w

hole.

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a whole

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and shopping

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hand, shopping

outlets are required for the growth of e

conomy

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the economy

and GDP as well. In my opinion the authorities should use the land f

or

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of

malls and

then

for leisure activities too.

Hence

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

partially agree with the statement. To start with shopping centres a

re

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is

a major a

ttrraction

the force by which one object attracts another

attraction

for the public and

hence

generate l

ot

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lots

of revenue to the owners and g

overnment.

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the government

Society id highly attracted to these public sites Especially on weekends and make a lot o

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connects a noun with the preceding word

of

money to the state. Making new sites for

such

purposes is always appreciated for

such

reason.

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onsequently it

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Consequently, it

plays an important role in

h

te

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the

heart

development of the economy. More going by the past records

this

idea has never been in v

ein

characteristic of false pride; having an exaggerated sense of self-importance

vain

as compared to o

her

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

her

centres for physical activities which may turn to be unsuccessful in n

ear future

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the near future

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On

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the

other h

and some

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hand, some

argue that

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the

land should be used parks

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,

omplexes, museums, or

such

places for people to spend their leisure t

ime which

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time, which

may help

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the

society by k

eeoing

conformity or harmony

keeping

them healthy and

thus

c

ontribiting

tending to bring about; being partly responsible for

contributing

to the nation. A healthy body leads to a

healthy mind so

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a healthy mind, so

if the p

oeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

are healthy a s

tatw

the territory occupied by one of the constituent administrative districts of a nation

state

statue

State

would prosper more than any other. Being Physically and mentally fit is the structure of a developed economy. Encouraging people to these may require more and new centres for them to be involved.

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herefore

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Therefore, this

this

argument is highlighted. To conclude the state o

suld

prepare and issue for public distribution or sale

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used

sued

be

such

that a balance should be there in terms of building new projects for s

hopping

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shops

and centres f

ofr

appropriate to; intended for

for

free-time a

ctivites

any specific behavior

activities

because health is wealth whilst wealth is only generated when the sales are made which require shopping sites.