for centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. with the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?
We
can not
imagine the world without the computers anymore. They became part and parcel of our lives since the beginning of their introduction. Once considered a sophisticated skill set, can not
cannot
computers
skills, Suggestion
computer
nowadays become
indispensable. We Suggestion
nowadays becomes
are already seeing
these technical Suggestion
already see
education
as a mandatory subject added to the curriculum as early as beginning primary education
. I strongly advocate the necessity to condsider
deem to be
consider
computer
literacy as a fourth skill and should definitely be added to the education
system.
Firstly
, the fundamental communication process has been completely shifted from conventional methods like mail, telegram, newspapers to email, sms
, and a short text message sent between mobile phones or other electronic devices
SMS
digitalized
news accessed through put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalised
computer
devices. This
emphasizes the imperative need for the computer
literacy right from the childhood. For example
, in order to apply for a job these days, we need to have an email along with a digitalized
CV as mandatory, so that employers can communicate with potential put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalised
condidates
seeking the employment as quickly as possible.
a politician who is running for public office
candidates
candidate
On the other hand
, to perform basic day to day tasks including but not limited to shopping
, banking, buying flight tickets and book hotel online, these Accept comma addition
to, shopping
computer
skills are essential. For example
, in the instance of transfering
funds between bank accounts, it used to take days, if not weeks. transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
However
, it is almost instantaneous these days when it comes to money transfers. This
is only possible with the introdction
of these super computing devices. formally making a person known to another or to the public
introduction
Hence
, it demands individuals to be equipped and familier
with well known or easily recognized
familiar
computer
eduction
.
To conclude, we can't imagine the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
addiction
every day
life without the knowledge of how to operate these smart devices as they are embedded found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
into
each one's life so deeply. Over the period of time these skills emerged as essential and mandatory for the human way of life. Suggestion
in
Hence
, I stongly
support the idea of adding with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
computer
skills to the core subjects we learn during our education
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