Some people say that popular tourist destinations are receiving bad effects from travelers. Why does this happen and what can be done to resolve this?

Tourisim
Suggestion
Tourism
has
flurished
grow vigorously
flourished
rapidly in the past 20 years.There has been an increase in the number of
toursit
Suggestion
tours it
attraction's world wide, particularly some
destinations
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destinations, such
such
as, Istanbul,
Suggestion
as Istanbul,
Paris and London have
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
the most visitors in the past years.
As a result
, pollution
,
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,
cost of living and commuting are some of the negative effects
experianced
having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation
experienced
by the residents of these cities.In
this
essay, I intend to explore the possible causes of
this
situation and suggest some ways forward to fix it. On the downside, some of the popular tourist cities are not designed to
accomedate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
large number of individuals.During the summer season, people from all over the globe converge to
Istunbul
the largest city and former capital of Turkey; rebuilt on the site of ancient Byzantium by Constantine I in the fourth century; renamed Constantinople by Constantine who made it the capital of the Byzantine Empire; now the seat of the Eastern Orthodox Church
Istanbul
due to its popularity.
Therefore
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Therefore, this
this
city
gets
overcroweded
cause to crowd together too much
overcrowded
, resulting in traffic jams and pollution.
Tourits
Suggestion
Tourists
Tour its
walk the
streats
a thoroughfare (usually including sidewalks) that is lined with buildings
streets
street
and cross the roads, not paying attention to the traffic rules.
Additionally
, basic commodities of
life namely
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life, namely
, fruits, meat and bread become expensive owing to the high demand from the visitors.
Moreover
, public transportation gets overcrowded and every finds it hectic to travel daily.
On the other hand
, every problem has a solution.Admittedly,
city
mayour
the head of a city government
mayor
mayors
and the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
need to plan the
tourisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
more
efficently
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
.As we are already aware, that the cities get populated by tourists during summer.For
this
reason,
city
mayour
the head of a city government
mayor
mayors
can allocate extra resources to facilitate the arrival of foreigners,
simulatniously
at the same instant
simultaneously
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
can limit the number of tourist visa the issue every year.
As a result
, there will be no rise in the prices of daily use items.It will
also
help prevent traffic jams.
This
result can only be achieved when proper planning takes place before the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
arrive. To conclude, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
that all the negative effects accompanying the
visiters
go to see a place, as for entertainment
visits
visitors
visitor
can be resolved if managed smartly.Clearly, efforts need to be done by the host
city
in advance to provide the resources.
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