Some people say that popular tourist destinations are receiving bad effects from travelers. Why does this happen and what can be done to resolve this?

Tourisim

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Tourism

has

flurished

grow vigorously

flourished

rapidly in the past 20 years.There has been an increase in the number of

toursit

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tours it

attraction's world wide, particularly some

destinations

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destinations, such

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as, Istanbul,

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as Istanbul,

Paris and London have

recieved

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

the most visitors in the past years.

As a result

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, pollution

,

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,

cost of living and commuting are some of the negative effects

experianced

having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation

experienced

by the residents of these cities.In

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essay, I intend to explore the possible causes of

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situation and suggest some ways forward to fix it. On the downside, some of the popular tourist cities are not designed to

accomedate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

large number of individuals.During the summer season, people from all over the globe converge to

Istunbul

the largest city and former capital of Turkey; rebuilt on the site of ancient Byzantium by Constantine I in the fourth century; renamed Constantinople by Constantine who made it the capital of the Byzantine Empire; now the seat of the Eastern Orthodox Church

Istanbul

due to its popularity.

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Therefore

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Therefore, this

this

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city

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gets

overcroweded

cause to crowd together too much

overcrowded

, resulting in traffic jams and pollution.

Tourits

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Tourists

Tour its

walk the

streats

a thoroughfare (usually including sidewalks) that is lined with buildings

streets

street

and cross the roads, not paying attention to the traffic rules.

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, basic commodities of

life namely

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life, namely

, fruits, meat and bread become expensive owing to the high demand from the visitors.

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, public transportation gets overcrowded and every finds it hectic to travel daily.

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, every problem has a solution.Admittedly,

city

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mayour

the head of a city government

mayor

mayors

and the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

need to plan the

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

more

efficently

with efficiency; in an efficient manner

efficiently

.As we are already aware, that the cities get populated by tourists during summer.For

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reason,

city

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mayour

the head of a city government

mayor

mayors

can allocate extra resources to facilitate the arrival of foreigners,

simulatniously

at the same instant

simultaneously

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

can limit the number of tourist visa the issue every year.

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, there will be no rise in the prices of daily use items.It will

also

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help prevent traffic jams.

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result can only be achieved when proper planning takes place before the

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

arrive. To conclude, I pen

down saying

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down, saying

that all the negative effects accompanying the

visiters

go to see a place, as for entertainment

visits

visitors

visitor

can be resolved if managed smartly.Clearly, efforts need to be done by the host

city

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in advance to provide the resources.