Many businesses in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run businesses outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experiences or knowledge

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Now a days many

business

people all over the world continue their

business

with their family members. Some people continue their family

business

to their parents. Most of the people think that the particular

business

is the pride of their family. They

also

think that it is the identity of their family. But I've a different opion

over

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

open

this

topic. Every

person

have t

heir

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has

own talent and own ideas to do in their life. Since some people wish to continue their

business

over the generations, They insist their family

member

to take over the

business

. Even they have different idea to do in their life, They are not allowi

ng to sh

Suggestion

allowed

ine in their wished career path. Due to their emotional sentiments, those people are dropping their wishes and goal and take over the

business

. Even they don'

have much skill in that

business

, They make them to be a

part

in that

business

. They think that their

business

should be filled with their family members only. They are forcing their family members to too

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

part

in the

business

. Since many

business

people have their own family

member

in their

business

, The skilled people from other family are not allowi

ng to ta

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allowed

part

in their

business

. Every

person

have t

heir

Suggestion

has

own dream and goal. With that goal, They are working hard to go forward to achieve that. Due to

this

kind of

busine

ss man, The

a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)

businessman

ir dreams are vanishing. Even their family members are not skilled in that

business

, They won'

allow other people to take

part

in their

business

This

may leads

their

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lead

business

to loss. But they won'

care about

such

stuff, They always

wants their

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always want

are always wanting

business

to be run by one of our family

member

. Beca

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members

use of

this

, Sometime there won'

be a right

person

in right

position .

Suggestion

the right position

Accept space

On con

Suggestion

uding

this

, Right

talent to be

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the right talent

the Right talent

in right

place. Ever

Suggestion

the right place

person

have t

heir

Suggestion

has

own talent. We should to force our family

member

to be stick

with

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stuck

our own family

business

. We should let them to shi

ne in th

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shine

eir own field. A

business

is not only for the family

member

, we can own the

busine

ss but we sh

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business, but

ould not have that

business

only for a single family.

Wed Nov 06 2019

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