Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Movies play a vital role in everyone's life by providing different experiences and knowledge to people. For some people, movies should be a source of entertainment while for other people, it should just be a source to get knowledge and educational values. After a long day at work, who does not like to be entertained? Watching a

movie

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can de- stress a person. Going to a

thetare

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

with your friends and family and watching an entertaining

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movie which

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movie, which

involves laughter can make anyone's day. Comedy, drama,

romantic

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romance

or any genre type movies can help the person to experience an emotion and

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spend time with their near and dear ones.

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that time,

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most

people

dont

do not

don't

feel like being educated on a serious topic, as they just want to

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

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themselves and watch an interesting story line.

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, some people like to watch movies which deliver an educational message or value. Nowadays, most of the movies raise social awareness and educate people on mental problems.

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, an entertaining

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movie but

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movie, but

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focusing on a social message can be in best of both the worlds. A recent famous Bollywood

movie

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, Toilet, is a really fun comedy

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movie but

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movie, but

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gives an important message of providing good sanitary washrooms in rural areas for women.

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helped people to identify how big is the problem in the rural areas of India, and people actually took a step forward to work for the betterment of women. I believe it is a personal choice, but movies can work in an integrated way to raise awareness in educating people on certain topics while making it entertaining to keep people still involved in the story line.

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the world of technology, people

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tend

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are tending

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to learn more by watching a video, documentary or a

movie

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to understand the critical issues which people are facing in the society.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

314 words

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