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the prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. government funding should reflect this. to what extent do you agree?

#prevention #health #illness #treatment #medicine #government
precaution
Suggestion
Precaution
 is better than cure. Nowadays, most of the diseases are spread due to
unhealthy lifestyle
Suggestion
unhealthy lifestyles
an unhealthy lifestyle
 and lack of hygienic awareness. Some experts have an opinion that if the government do some prevention scheme planning and fund it adequately than It is possible to avoid many diseases.
First
 of all, Today, getting treatment for any diseases is not a cup of tea, especially of lower and middle-class families. You should have too much money to pay hefty bills of
hospital
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the hospital
 and medicines and be ready to endure
pain
Suggestion
the pain
 while
curring
the process of becoming hard or solid by cooling or drying or crystallization
curing
carrying
caring
.
Additionally
, uncured diseases like cancer or diabetes can put you and your loved ones in the pathetic situation.
Moreover
, If you will consume a large number of medicines
then
 it will damage your internal immune system which is responsible to resist virus and infections bacterias.
by
Suggestion
By
this
 way, curing the diseases is a very costly deal and avoid if possible.
on
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On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
, lots of diseases are spreading due to unhealthy foods and contaminated drinking water supply. The government should focus on to provide healthy food and better infrastructure for pure drinking water supply. Apart from that,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
 can
lunch
set up or found
launch
 the vaccine program widely for the children and teenagers which can help to remove the foundation of the diseases.
For instance
, WHO declared that India is polio-free countries because of its extraordinary vaccine programs.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 should allocate its budget wisely in order to prevention of health issues. To sum up, I totally agree with the idea to focus on prevention of the diseases. As it is quite easy and handy compare to the suffering from diseases.

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