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The tendency of human beings to copy one other is shown in the popularity of some fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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The table highlights the percentage of the USA family size from 1790 to 1990, over a two century year period of time. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that
although
 7 members in a house were the most popular size of the family, the popularity
this
 had changed to two person household. Focusing
in
Suggestion
on
 the 1790, one person families consist the least proportion of the households, at 3.7%, with 2 and 3 persons' houses accounting for 7.8% and 11.7%, respectively.
However
, the largest proportion is contributed by 35.8 %, 7 people families. Remaining half of the total households are divided among 4, 5, 6, members' families, at around 13 % each category. After 100 years
,
Accept space
,
 popularity of 7 and 6 individuals' households' started to decline, while other groups continued to improve their levels, except negligible decrease of one member houses. The year 1990 witnessed a dramatic change; single member homes became one forth of the total households from just less 4% in two centuries ago.
Similarly
, 7 people homes plunged to just
arond
in the area or vicinity
around
 1% in 1990. Another
intersting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 point is that the average population in the USA
also
 reduced by half between 1790 and 1990 to 2.6 from 5.4
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