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It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

#parents #course #children
Nowadays there is an
up trend
an upward movement or trend as in business activity
uptrend
 of people who believe parents should be thought to how growing up children by joining in some classes. I completely agree that teaching people how to bring up children would be a good idea. There are several reasons why forcing parents to submit parenting training is beneficial for our society.
Firstly
, today, almost all psychologists believe that a huge number of
violence
Suggestion
violent
 crimes happens by those who grew up in
such
 families that their family members do not know how to relate by each other, especially parents do not know how to relate
by
Suggestion
with
 children.
for
Suggestion
For
 example, When their child, for the
first
 time stole something they punished him or her much
more tougher
Suggestion
tougher
 than they should do.
Secondly fast
Accept comma addition
Secondly, fast
 changing society and culture in these days that it is, itself due to the social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
, make a great gap between parents and new generations. And it seems crucial for adults who want to be parents to learn how to communicate by new generations and
also
 understand their way of thinking about life.
Finally
, I believe that an old culture which imagine everyone should have be a parent is completely wrong and we must correct it, so using
this
 kind of parenting training courses could be a useful tool to evaluate which one of attenders is well enough to be a parent. In conclusion, my view is that forcing parents to join parenting training courses beneficial for all of us, and our community too.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parenting training
  • child-rearing
  • valuable guidance
  • effective techniques
  • child development
  • psychology
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