Some suggest that young people should take a job for few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people recommend that the school graduates should

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for a few years before enrolling universities.

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essay will suggest that self-identification is the biggest benefit of

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and losing belief to

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is the principal drawback. These days the quality of tertiary

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is suffering due to its students who could not choose their occupation properly. According to a recent student satisfaction survey of universities conducted by the Mongolian National Statistical Agency, two

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of the respondents answered that they are dissatisfied with their current

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because of their incorrect choice of the profession.

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, it is expected that after their graduation, most of them might not

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as their professional major.

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, gap years may allow younger people to recognize themselves by knowing their real interest as well as needs while experiencing different jobs. In my case, one of my university classmates used to

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prior to

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the university.

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, he could understand the profession which is highly suitable for him, and graduated from the university with high distinction along with several job offers. Despite these advantages, some students are persuaded for getting a job

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of go directly to higher

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.

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they wish to

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acquire a bachelor degree after working for a time, most of them lose gradually their hope to

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at a higher level

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due to

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place adaptation. An illustration of

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is that one

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of students who take years off never

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at universities, as stated by the Ministry of

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and Culture of Mongolia’s annual report.

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, my grandfather could not enter the tertiary

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because of year off even though receiving an unconditional offer from Lomonosov Moscow State University. In conclusion, taking years off might be advantageous if students use it for identifying themselves effectively,

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, they should be careful since it can be reducing their motivation to

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for

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