It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The early age of every child is crucial for their
future especially
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future, especially
when it is
identifing
having the identity known or established
identified
the
characterestics
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristics
of good and bad.
Hence
, most people opine that the only way to guide them is by giving punishments for their
misbehavious
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
.
However
,  I believe children should be punished for
cirtain act
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certain acts
certain act
a certain act
of
them but
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them, but
not in the
convensional
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
way. To
beging
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
with, most children unaware of the misdeeds done by them.
Primary reason
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The primary reason
A primary reason
for
that is
the
lac
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
lake
loss
of life experience. Developing
mind
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the mind
of these juveniles could not distinguish between right and wrong unless they are
tought
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
.
Therefore
, parents and teachers must
advice
give advice to
advise
them of their mistakes before employing
such
methods.
Moreover
, explaining them regarding the good and bad in the world with love would help the children develop
affesionate
having or displaying warmth or affection
affectionate
towards society rather than
haterade
the emotion of intense dislike; a feeling of dislike so strong that it demands action
hatred
due to the retribution.
Hence
, always the punishment should be
second option
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the second option
a second option
On the other hand
,
retrinbution
a justly deserved penalty
retribution
is important on some
occations
something you have to do
occasions
for
adolescnts
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents
to learn
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learn
a lesson about their actions. If a child does not obey to the advice,
then
they
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be punished.
However
, traditional physical punishment is not
accepted
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accepting
my most of the countries in recent times.
Instead schools
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Instead, schools
and other educational institutes provide more creative punishments that provides other benefits as well.
For instance
, my school now giving punishments by asking them to cleaning
class rooms
a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
and look after people in
a
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an
elder's home. These punishments are more practical and add some values to the lives of the children.
Thus
,
disciplining
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the disciplining
of the children is vital with new methods that do not cause harm to them. In conclusion,
although
the punishment is not the only way to take a child
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the better path, still it plays a
siginificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
role. That said,
tradintonal
physical abuse might not be the best solution for
this
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punishment
  • positive reinforcement
  • consequences
  • time-outs
  • removal of privileges
  • open communication
  • clear expectations
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • disciplinary action
  • proportionate
  • moral values
  • internalization
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