many countries experiencing population growth and need more homes. should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?

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Many countries around the world are
strugling
engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
to address the ever growing need for housing, which is originated from the invariably growing population. Some people advocate for the urban housing while others are voting for more rural housing development. Both perspectives have their merits and demerits. In my view, building contemporary towns away from the cities is the best approach to alleviate some of the problems generated by urbanization.
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with, Most economic activities take place in cities which offer jobs, business opportunities, schools, hospitals, public transportation and other public services.
This
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lures
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lure
individuals to come work and live in these metropolitans.
As a result
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, many people prefer to stay closer to their workplaces here.
Consequently
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, cities are overcrowded.
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, the apartments and skyscrapers that we are witnessing nowadays are, a result of excessive population,
thus
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making the cosmopolitans
further
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conjusted
overfull as with blood
congested
. In order to alleviate the above mentioned issues, new towns should be built away from these
gigantinc
so exceedingly large or extensive as to suggest a giant or mammoth
gigantic
areas, and villages could be the best possible answer for these
cricis
someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime
crooks
crosses
strikes
.
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, developing new townships in rural areas bring new jobs and economic
opportunities allowing
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opportunities, allowing
the development activities spread across, rather than limiting them to the cities.
This
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intern helps reducing the traffic in metros because people don't have to travel far for work.
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, countries like Australia have developed smaller towns away from each other in a way that, they are self sustained and equipped with shops, housing, infrastructure and public services. Because of
this
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approach, they are able to overcome problems
arrise
come into existence; take on form or shape
arise
arose
arises
from overcrowding in big developed places. In conclusion, I recommend that the new townships should be built in rural areas rather urban ones. That way, we can address the
inherant
existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
inherent
space issues and traffic
conjustion
excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
in urbanized world. At the same time, it
also
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helps villages develop without limiting the economic growth only
to
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in
the cities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Infrastructure
  • Urban sprawl
  • Overcrowding
  • Sustainable development
  • Greener living spaces
  • Economic boost
  • Public services
  • Planned communities
  • Housing affordability
  • Social cohesion
  • Amenities
  • Cultural integration
  • Ecosystem
  • Alleviate
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