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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is the alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching?

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Evolution of technology drives us towards a scenario where Artificial intelligence would soon replace the teachers in the classroom. Artificial Intelligence has evolved in
this
 decade, which will soon restore teachers in the upcoming years. If we take a glimpse of the
next
 century , in m
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opinion Artificial Intelligence will definitely replace the teachers. Now a day’s children can get a good exposure of knowledge through various media like YouTube, so in the near future there will be a classroom with Smartboards or projector which shows and teaches a lesson by displaying related videos. In India classrooms in many schools have introduced Smartboards which slowly reduce the work of a teacher to explain a lesson.
This
 will soon create a classroom with automated programs created through Artificial Intelligence. Best alternative for traditional way of teaching would be evolutionary of humanoid Robots with AI. Children will miss the Physical love and care given by the teachers,
this
 can be changed with humanoid robots, which should be programmed that it should understand Student's behaviour. Government of Tamilnadu state has introduced a QR code for each lesson which will display a video of the exercises which is self -explanatory , whic
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ce that our future classrooms will be surrounded by Artificial Intelligence. Artificial Intelligence will replace the teachers in the Classrooms. In spite it can take a place of a teacher if it understands the Child psychology and the best substitute for
this
 will be Humanoid Robots with AI. Let us wait for a fully Automated future.
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