In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In England and some other European countries, it is a common practice that retired elderly people go to live in facilities offering company of other old people, and
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of
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as nurses, nutritionists, physical therapists, etc. Since the general
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of elderly people needs to be performed judiciously, it is necessary to contract competent professionals which
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. One question that pops up in
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subject is: who has to be responsible for financing facilities taking
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of elderly people? In my opinion, there is not a straight answer to
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question. It would be great if the
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could finance all the necessary
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of the population, but it is known that the available budget is not sufficient for taking
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of everything for everyone. For
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reason, I think that wealthy elderly people and/or elderly people belonging to wealthy families should be responsible for financing their own
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. In
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case, the resources saved by the
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could be directed to other ends
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as,
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, general public health, youth education, etc.
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, there are many people who worked during all their active
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periods
without being able to gather enough funds for their retirement. For these people, I think that the
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should direct some part of the gathered taxes to the payment of their
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justified by the fact that, in many cases, the retirement salaries are not enough to pay for housing, feeding,
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the preservation of mental and physical health by preventing or treating illness through services offered by the health profession
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and other needs. In conclusion, I think that both
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and families should be responsible for financing the
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of elderly people. Based on the cost of living of each city and the income of each family, the
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could define subsidy ranges varying from 0% to 100% for extremely wealthy to extremely poor families.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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