The diagram shows the stages in the cultivation and management of a forest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the stages in the cultivation and management of a forest.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the typical life cycle of
forest
trees,
as well as
how many stages are involved in the process of cultivation and management of a
forest
.
Overall
, there are two basic sections for cultivating and managing a
forest
, and both of these have four stages in each.
To begin
with
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the cultivation process,
which
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apply
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starts
from
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shapling
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shaping
sampling
the ground properly. After
then
, activities
is
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started for making suitable land followed by tree plantation programs. Eventually,
this
process
in
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is
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by pruning trees. Coming to
management
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the management
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stages of
forest
trees, First and foremost, are felled by
expert
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.
Secondly
, those are either thinned or
onsit
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onsite
onset
processed into various segments for convenient transport.
Lastly
, those are supplied to mills and
klin
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kiln
drying centres by trucks or lorry. It can be seen that these logs are now being used
in
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numerous purposes
such
as using as fuel for producing energy, producing paper and onboard for regular uses, or making planks, floorboards or pieces of furniture for
klin
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kiln
drying.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words forest with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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