In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant example.

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In a lot

connects a noun with the preceding word

governments the age of humans who do

crim

(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act

crime

crimes

things is getting down. There are some causes of

this

Linking Words

such

Linking Words

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

schools and parents

dont

do not

don't

look good for their children or banning for

this

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is not strong, and

belonging to me

mine

from opinion solution of

this

Linking Words

problems

Suggestion

problem

is that parents must spend more time with their children and states could do ban for

this

Linking Words

more hard. It could be good if

theachers

a person whose occupation is teaching

teachers

at school or fathers and mother could

spent

Suggestion

spend

more time with

thieir

of them or themselves

their

young, grow up children.

Whis

Suggestion

Whilst

talking

their

people in general

they

can study them what is

goog

having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

good

and what is bad. I thing that in

early ages

Suggestion

the early ages

of their life it could be changed. If

parent

Suggestion

parents

a parent

have not time for

this

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it could do elder brother or sister, and other close relatives.

Because as

Accept comma addition

Because, as

they already went

this

Linking Words

way they can understand them.

To day

Suggestion

Today

in most of countries in schools have

psiciators

a female person who has the same parents as another person

sisters

. It is very help to government to

decrise

decrease in size, extent, or range

decrease

crim

(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act

crime

country

Suggestion

the country

For example

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, according to academic

researchs

systematic investigation to establish facts

research

talk with

psiciator

a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle

sector

solicitor

help change humans from the bad way. Another reason of increasing criminals at early ages is the government, because there have not strong ban for

this

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. And doing ban for

this

Linking Words

stronge

being definitely out of the ordinary and unexpected; slightly odd or even a bit weird

strange

for

this

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they can

decrise

decrease in size, extent, or range

decrease

crim

(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act

crime

. Before

to do

Suggestion

doing

something wrong humans will be thing

twisly

Suggestion

. For

examly

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

statistic

Suggestion

statistical

statistics

information show that in countries where banning for crime is strong criminals less for 36% than in other states. In

concluation I

Accept comma addition

conclusion, I

conclusion I

would say that young people

Suggestion

are

our feature and I

bealive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that with all ways and methods we must avoid them from crime and protect them.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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274 words

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In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant example.

Fully explain your ideas

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