You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of the members
in
the Change preposition
of
musicians
Change to a genitive case
musician's
musicians'
group
who practices in your community
hall. I am writing to request you to please allow us to continue music practice.
Our group
plays songs for Indian festivals. We travelled across the state for our performances. Recently, we got recognised as top 10 bands in the country for community
music.
Our concerts across the state helped people of the same community
to get together and build relationships. During the performances
we have Add a comma
,performances
charitable
Add an article
a charitable
fund
collected for Fix the agreement mistake
funds
education
of underprivileged children. Most of the members in our Add an article
the education
group
are university students and sometimes the money earned from our performances is used for their college education.
As many of our group
members are students, we cannot afford any other hall for practising. I humbly request you to please allow to
continue our music practice in the Correct pronoun usage
us to
community
hall on Weekend mornings from 6-9 AM.
I look forward to hear
from you.
Your's faithfully,
KalyanChange the verb form
hearing
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