Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. what do you thing are caused of this? what solutions can you suggest ?

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These days more and more people are suffering from sickness

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will discuss the main causes of

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relaated

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

including sedentary lifestyle and job related pressure.

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a solution

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to curtail these problems by improving diet and managing work life. People are working

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of hours.

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people in general

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consume junk food for saving

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spend on lunch, dinner or breakfast.

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is because people have become more ambitious and in order to achieve success they prolong their

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office,

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cooking healthy is nowadays

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perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

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a luxury

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and it is evident most people do want to spend their valuable

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having meals.

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, many people would prefer a working lunch

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eating

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their desk rather than walking towards a cafeteria. The lack of

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involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

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activity and strive to become the best employee pressure, often prone human to

stress

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related diseases. To eradicate

stress

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related illness one must maintain a disciplined physical routine and should have balanced work life. People need to realise that working long hours and consuming unhealthy food could disturb their immune system, which make them more likeable for sickness. In

recent survey

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a recent survey

, it was discovered that in

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decade more young people have died because of cardiac arrest than older people.

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, in order to have

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not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war

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lifestyle, people should invest more

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with family relaxing and doing some physical activities. In conclusion, in today's fast paced

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more people are becoming ill

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stress

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discussed the causes which included competitive workforce and bad eating habits.

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suggested the solution twofold- one they should focus on balancing home and work and

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should focus on their well-being by exercising.

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Topic Vocabulary:

stress-related illnesses
rapid pace
pressure
balance
omnipresent
information overload
disconnect
economic uncertainties
job insecurity
financial stress
environmental factors
chronic stress
work-life balance
flexible working hours
mental health
support programs
physical activity
healthy eating habits
awareness
accessibility
counseling
stress management
community environment
reconnect with nature

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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. what do you thing are caused of this? what solutions can you suggest ?

Your opinion

Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rathan than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

14/02/13: Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections. Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter 1. describe the problems 2. explain how they are affecting people 3. say what the company should do to help You don't need to write any address