Some people think that the most important thing the rich can do with money is to help people. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In the world there are mainly two discrimination among people

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they are rich and poor on the basis of

money

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The wealthy

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Wealthier

people can do

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alot

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a lot

to help people who do not have

eough

as much as necessary

enough

money

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to live.Charity has

vital role

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a vital role

to help people for rich people

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another important thing is to start

business

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to give employment for local people. Rich people are the people who have plethora of

money

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they spend it

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and

also

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can save it

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but other than

this

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they can help others with their kindness.In the world most people suggest charity is the best way to do something for people who need financial help.For

this

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purpose there are

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alot

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a lot

of organizations and individuals.

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hence

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

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rich people can donate their

money

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for helping somebody who

are

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familier

well known or easily recognized

familiar

to them or unknown to them.

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wealthiest people can spend their

money

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for education of poor

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

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welfare of

old

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older

people

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medical help to patients.

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, every people not ready to accept charity, they have a mind to work, for

thelping

an individual quantity of food or drink taken as part of a meal

helping

t helping

taping

those

type

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types

of people rich can do some

business

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.The

business

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can give

opputunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

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alot

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a lot

of people who are ready to work.Giving employment will help a lot of people to save their family from financial problems.

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example if

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example, if

a rich man

start

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starts

a local

business

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to consume

cocunut

the edible white meat of a coconut; often shredded for use in e.g. cakes and curries

coconut

kerala

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Kerala

will help a lot of people to get

job

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jobs

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conclusion

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in my opinion rich people can do

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alot

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a lot

of things to poor to step forward financially

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the main thing is to help them

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with

charity.Another important one is to start an

enturpenurship

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give a way

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give away

giveaway

to people who suffer more.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

265 words

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