Due to advances in science, it is now possible for people to live to 100 years old or even longer. While some people think it is a good thing, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Modern technology makes a long

life

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reality where people are able to surpass one hundred's birthday.

This

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situation creates debates whether it is a way to long fulfilled lives or to the prolonged suffering of

sick elderly

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the sick elderly population

population

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. In the following essay, both points of view are presented and my personal tendency to agree with the supporters of the

longer

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longest

lives

is described

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are described

. The main arguments of protesters against the increasing of human's lifespan are the suffering of

elderly

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the elderly population

population

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and the associated costs of the health system.

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, statistics

shows

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show

that the most of the older

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population, despite of

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population, despite

their health issues, would give any money to prolong their lives.

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, most of the deaths are happening not due to long lasting issues, but

as a result

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of fast developing

organs

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organ

failures.

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, in my view, the prolonged suffering argument is not convincing as the suffering

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population itself

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population, it

population it

does not agree with it and the

second

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argument of costs is

also

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decreases

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decreased

decreasing

with progress.

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, the

long

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longest

life

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is seen as a way to create a significant progress to humanity by increasing the average level of education and experience accumulated with age, and

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, to make private lives better due to

wisdom

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the wisdom

and added

life

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span.

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an extension of adult

life

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creates more adults in the

population

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, making all the relationships within the society less aggressive and the society as a whole more educated and progressive.

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, each

individual enjoys

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individual, enjoys

longer adulthood and elderly, which are seen as a

more enjoyable

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most enjoyable

periods

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period

life

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, compared to the struggle of teenagers. In conclusion, extending the

life

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span is seen as a way to prolong suffering and create a burden to the younger

population

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by some and as a solution to increase

life

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quality and progress by others.

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my mind, the prolonged

life

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will create wiser

population

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that will be able to solve any arising problems.

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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

323 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

longevity
life expectancy
healthcare system
wisdom
resource scarcity
advancements
social support
lifelong learning
environmental impact
consumption
technological changes
personal and societal growth

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Due to advances in science, it is now possible for people to live to 100 years old or even longer. While some people think it is a good thing, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

the plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.discuss both these views and give your own opinion.