A person worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honor, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is obvious that people assess each other by the amount of property and the civic levels they have, not by their morals. I completely disagree with
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point of view because individuals should be evaluated through their ethics not by how much stuff they have. By the end of
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opinion, will be outlined. It became common in present time to define people depending on their position in the society or to theirs belongs. People
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the outside aspects like the clothes others wear, the places others go and the superior job others have. As consequence of the accelerate evolution
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social media,
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as Twitter, Facebook and Instagram, the majority of the community converted to be a superficial.
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, the studies showed that the number of followers of actors and actress
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, it is undeniable the old morals
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as respect others, being responsible, honesty and integrity seem to be forgotten nowadays, but they still play an important part in many communities.
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, if the community lost these ethics, it will return to be savage. In fact, the society still judge on people according to their behaviour with others.
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, Doctor, Magdy Yacoup is the most beloved and famous doctor on the all
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for his sympathy. To conclude,
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persons prefer to be a friend to the rich and the famous
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I believe that the traditional morals will be the most important. Actually, the parents have a huge role to bring up their children on morals like nobility, sympathy and honesty to be stable minded adolescence and respectable leaders in the future.
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