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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Some people argue that
one
 can know a lot about a
person
's background by referring to his attire.
This
 essay will disagree with
such
 a belief because people do not always
dress
 in the best possible manner and it is impossible to understand
one
's intention with
this
appraoch
move towards
approach
. Some people, despite knowing what is
right thing
Suggestion
the right thing
 to wear, may not end up dressing like they ideally should have.
That is
 because they are lazy or just do not want to take the efforts to
dress
upto
Suggestion
up to
 the mark. My father is a good example here; he is a
gentlement
a man of refinement
gentleman
 and
one
 of the best human beings I have ever met but does not
dress
 well on most of the occasions.
Such
 people can easily be misunderstood if they are judged through their clothing. The other factor why
this
 theory may not work is because clothes do not reveal the real intentions of a
person
. A
theif
a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it
thief
safe
,
for
example may
Accept comma addition
example, may
dress
 up like a royal to hide his intentions of robbing the most happening celebrity
party
Suggestion
parties
 in the town. People attending the part and believing in
this
 theory may assume he is
one
 of them and would not be able to escape the robbery, unfortunately.
Thus
, it is a flawed approach to understand a
person
. In conclusion, some
perceieve
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
perceived
 that how
one
 dresses
speaks
Suggestion
speak
 a lot about that
person
.
Truth
Suggestion
The truth
,
however could
Accept comma addition
however, could
 be far from that because not everybody dresses right all the time and it is impossible to unearth the real intentions of a
person
 going by his dressing style.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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