Growing number of overweight people put stress on healthcare system. Some people believe that Teaching about physical fitness at school is the solution for this while others don't believe in this. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Well-being of people is one of the most important aspect of any modern society. Health care systems put a lot efforts to handle physical fitness issues cause by overweight people who increase in count day by day. There is an argument regarding how to resolve

this

pressure on the system where some think that enriching

school

curriculum with physical education subjects while others disagree.

This

essay will discuss both views and present the personal agreement status f

or

Suggestion

of

the matter. P

ersonally I

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Personally, I

believe that it is not the best solution for

this

matter to teach more physical education related subjects a

t

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in

the

school

. Because overweight is a practical

issue

which demands more practical solutions to resolve it

instead

of taking theoretical approaches.

For example

, the major reason for o

verweighting

excessive heating

overheating

everything

is l

ack

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the lack

of exercises caused by our modern l

ife styles.

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyles

T

herefore it

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Therefore, it

would be more effective to employ more exercise oriented programs at schools, universities and w

ork places.

a place where work is done

workplaces

Perhaps we can have a 30 m

inutes

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minute

window in each morning to conduct exercises nation wide. The

next

reason for

this

growing number of overweight people is that people are getting used to have more f

ast,

having an (over)abundance of flesh

fat

processed and junk foods so that they can keep up with the pace of the world which moves i

n

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at

high speed. As a solution we can create trends for encouraging people to use more natural and self prepared foods.

T

herefore we

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Therefore, we

can see that there are more practical and effective methods we can use to solve o

verweight

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the overweight issue

overweight issues

an overweight issue

issue

.

In contrast

, some people hold the view that it would be more effective to teach the importance of physical fitness at their young ages. We can take Japan as an example where they teach all sorts of general b

ehavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

correction and improvement lessons which Japan actually got succeeded.

T

herefore it

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Therefore, it

would be fair to think that

s

chool curriculum

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the school curriculum

is the best place to start solving the

issue

. To conclude, even though part of society believes that physical education lessons should be integrated into

s

chool curriculum

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the school curriculum

to solve the overweight

issue

, I think the

otherwise

where we require more practical approaches like daily exercise time periods and encouraging people to consume more natural and self prepared foods.