Some people think that teenagers who commit crime should be treated the same way as adults criminals.To what extend do u agree or disagree?

There are various ways of punishments for people who are committing crime.It is
oftet
many times at short intervals
often
said that young offenders should be held accountable for the actions just as adults.I strongly disagree with
this
notion because
young sters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
are not matured as well as if we treat same as grownups they might be as a criminal rest of their
life
due to merge with other wrongdoers. To commence with
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it is thought that the children who are
engage
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engaged
engaging
in corruptions are not aware of
further
actions owing to their immaturity.To be clear
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youths do not know the consequences of the offence what they are doing and they only think about current satisfaction.
For example
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the studies
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have figured
that over the quarter of the misdeed children became
honorable
not disposed to cheat or defraud; not deceptive or fraudulent
honourable
mainly due to
wiseful
being of use or service
useful
wishful
action
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action, such
such
as rehabilitation and proper education they did immorality.So I believe young criminals could reform by
such
type of actions as they are not well developed yet. A
further
point in against of
this
statement is
serious accusation
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a serious accusation
like senior citizen would
inturn
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in turn
teenagers to malefactors in their
further
life
.To be specific
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if the children are
imprisoned they
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imprisoned, they
might unite with other serious culprits
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result, there
will a chance of adapting their
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and
finally
it reflects their future
life
.They do not get the time to rectify their mistakes.For illustration
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last
month there was a news about unbelievable robbery which was held by youths and they confessed that they got the idea from the offenders in prison. In conclusion
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I believe criminals should be punished according to the law.
However
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I strongly disagree with the same laws for both adults and children.Children ‘s misconducts can be addressed through educating
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probation or rehabilitation.
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