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In what ways can new technology help maintain our traditions?

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Introduction
Technology has driven the world with an immense force,
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 it has been growing and people is abiding it.
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, life has turned drastically as from starting with our
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 to end of the
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 we have been interacting with some or other gadgets. Maybe it has changed our lifestyle in the
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 couple of years. Let's see the different advantages and disadvantages that technology has driven us with our traditions.
Body paragraph 1
Going over the different advantages,
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 of all, it is a global and an optimal source of information. Over the period, lots of users have gathered in the network, which we are able to access and learn,
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, knowing the fact that it can be a concrete or a vague piece of information. Let's take an example, we are starting our
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 with an alarm on our mobile phone and getting all works done in a computer, forgetting the fact we have lived in ages before we had a computer. With increasing population and growing technology, it has made our world smaller, people are now more connected and we have reached an apex point in globalisation.
Body paragraph 2
Moving over the disadvantages,
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 humans are more dependent on technology that we have become lethargic.
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, if we are hungering and we need food,
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 we simply order through phone never thought of going and having or getting it to him. Traditions have been affected to some extend, before we are 100 percent involved in a particular task, but if we have to see now
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, interaction of gadgets and communication devices have taken over.
Conclusion
Concluding by stating the facts that every development has a positive and a negative side of it, we just have to see that what weights more for us.
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, if things are going on our way,
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 a small amount of disadvantage or deviation in our traditions won't mind much for us.

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