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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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Since w
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the world
is becoming more global every single day, learning a foreign
language
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 is becoming more important. How to learn a new
language
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on the other hand
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, is still an often-debated topic.
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 there are several ways of learning a new
language
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such
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 as studying on your own, taking lessons as a part of a class and taking lessons online, I believe that taking private lessons is the most effective way in terms of learning a foreign
language
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 of all, studying on your own may seem like an effective way in terms of learning a new
language
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, since every person knows themselves better than anyone.
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, people can easily get bored or lose their motivation when they study alone. Some studies have shown that m
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the majority
a majority
of the individuals who prefer to learn a new
language
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 by themselves do not even start to practice that
language
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 just because they are afraid of failing.
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, most people take group lesson to learn a new
language
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 nowadays as there is an advantage to practice with others.
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, those people cannot get the needed attention from their teachers due to high demand on teacher’s time.
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, they end up failing when they try to learn a new
language
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.
On the other hand
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, taking private lessons from a tutor provides people with the individual attention they need in terms of learning a foreign
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. It is widely known that when learning something new it is important to get some help from the experts.
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 it can be quite expensive for most individuals, its benefits outweigh its drawbacks in the long term. To sum up, there are many ways of learning a foreign
language
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.
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, after a thorough analysis of both advantages and disadvantages of the several ways, it is concluded that taking p
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private lessons
is a far better when it comes to learning a new
language
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