The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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has been one of the best choices of

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as they are cost-effective along with a pollution-free source of

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, nuclear

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has a high productivity. In the production of atomic

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, radioactive substances like uranium and thorium are used, which emit the different types of radiation. When an unstable atom of uranium collides with the fast-moving hydrogen atom, nuclear fission occurs with the liberation of an enormous amount of heat, light, and sound

energy

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. Here only a few grams of uranium

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are required

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for about 28k megawatt

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plant, which is estimated

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to supply electricity to

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megawatts

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, the atomic bombs dropped by the USA during the war were enough to destroy the whole city of Japan and have not recovered yet from the nuclear attack.

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the production ratio of

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is insane while

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the workforce

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area as it is dangerous to every creature. Mainly, the area inside the plant is served by the robots. People are infected by that reactive substance,

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, robots are not affected. The use of robots aid to cost efficiency. Generally, computers and robots are

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, a survey conducted by undergraduate students of the University of Melbourne found that using the robots in the nuclear field has decreased the need for people to involve in dangerous works.

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handle the plant properly. In conclusion,

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essay discussed the positive benefits of nuclear

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is a high productivity rate and less individual

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requirement. In my opinion, Nuclear technology's perks outperform despite its drawbacks. In the future, indeed,

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will improve by overcoming its hindering points.

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