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Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve the problem while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Increased demand of products can make
law
an air mass of lower pressure; often brings precipitation
low
 quality products being made, overspending can lead to debt.
this
Suggestion
This
 consumerism may produce unnecessary waste, people can pace with
fast changing economy
Suggestion
the fast changing economy
peer
Suggestion
Peer
 pressure, competing with neighbour, keeping up with the
jones
United States labor leader (born in Ireland) who helped to found the Industrial Workers of the World (1830-1930)
Jones
, latest trendy products to enhance self image
well
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
trained competent
Accept comma addition
trained, competent
 staff
are
Suggestion
is
 the key to success,
this
 help them to promote products to the public
Sports teams and players
Suggestion
Sports players and teams
 are given equipment, which they could not afford
otherwise
 and they can focus on their game and practice
instead
 of being distracted by financial worries. Sports fans respect the company which
assist
Suggestion
assists
 the players. The company can link their name with successful players.
SOme
Suggestion
Some
 companies advertise unhealthy products, unsuccessful and badly
behaverd
behave in a certain manner; show a certain behavior; conduct or comport oneself
behaved
players
Suggestion
player's
 name can be linked to company name
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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