The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graphs illustrate the proportions of outgoings in two different cities,
Japan
and Malaysia
, in the year 2010, namely, housing, transport, food, health care, and others
goods and services.
Correct pronoun usage
other
Overall
, the major proportion of expenditures was other goods and services in Japan
while
the main outgoing was housing in Malaysia
. However
, the lowest percentages were health care spending in both countries.
It can be seen that the greatest amount of housing expenditures in Malaysia
was lower than in Japan
with 34% and 21% respectively as the percentages of health care outgoing in Malaysia
were twice less than Japanese’s with 6% and 3%. In addition
in Japan
the transport expense (20%) was twice that of Add a comma
,Japan
Malaysia
(10%)
In contrast
. Food expense in Japan
(24%) was 3% lower than in Malaysia
(27%). Yet, compared with other goods and services in Japan
at 29%, their percentages
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percentage
was
3% higher than Change the verb form
were
Malaysia
’s at 26%.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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