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Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

#media #news #publications
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 news in any corner of the world. Some individuals believe that media should include more positive news in thier post
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views regarding
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the crime rate
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declining
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the quiz competition
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, after detail research of the Times of India reveals that the student's memory increased who read daily good news. To conclude, all aforementioned standpoints lead me to create inference
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directly impacts
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