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Some people think playing computer games is bad for children on everything. Others think it has some positive on the way children develop. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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 games are quite popular among teenagers. A number of people think
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 has bad influence on every aspect of the child. A few think it has some positive impact on the child’s growth. In my opinion, playing
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 games certainly helps them to develop certain skills, but
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 at the expense of their health.
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 with, games have been the fundamental way of teaching skills to children. Growth in technology made
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 games popular among teenagers.
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 to that, playing puzzle based or strategic games develop soft skills and team build techniques. Simultaneously, virtual games have made it possible for juveniles to meet like minded people and share ideas with them.
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, the research paper published by “Stanford University” states that children who play video games are 10 times more productive and multitasking than their peers who do not play games.
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, spending a great deal of time playing games will lead to several health related issues among children. Problems
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 as, back pain, joint pain and eye strain are common because most of the games played using
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 require the player to sit and stare at the screen all the time. To illustrate, the number of children wearing spectacles has increased after
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 games became more popular. In conclusion, no doubt there are some pros involved in playing video games.
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, these skills are achieved at the cost of health, proper care should be taken to overcome
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 issues so that children can enjoy quality time playing and learning.
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