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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future

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The great
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The greater
 number of languages is vanishing off the face of the earth every year. It is forecast that the entire world will be speaking the same
language
 in the future. On the one hand, establishment of single
language
 official around the world would facilitate our life substantially. It would exclude the sphere of translation and study of foreign languages, what in turn allows the society to concentrate on more essential areas of life and foster their development.
In addition
,
absence
Suggestion
the absence
 of
language
 diversity could reduce or even exterminate the national
conflicts bringing
Accept comma addition
conflicts, bringing
 the stability and peace for everyone.
However
,
language
 is an integral part of national culture and identity. It encompasses the history, art and belief,
consequently
 gradual
language
 extinction will prompt the loss of culture hereditary causing irreversible changes in the society. Beyond that, it is scientifically proved that multilingualism heightens people’s intellect and memory.
Moreover
, knowledge of more than one
language
deter
Suggestion
deters
 emergence of dementia among the elderly.
For example
,
number
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a number
the number
 of studies shown that those who speak two or more languages had the symptoms of dementia five years later than speakers of a single
language
. In conclusion, the disadvantages of single
language
 are formidable,
thus
 enactment of the same
language
 worldwide needs a deeper consideration.

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