Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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days as

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days, as

there are numerous sports which are beneficial to people in reduce obesity and waste time. While some people opine that playing personal’s sports is better, I subscribe to participate as a

team

.

Individuals

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Individual

sports is a sport which we can play with your opponent or one player and there are several explanations that playing

individuals

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individual

sports is very beneficial.

Firstly

, playing sports

such

as badminton or tennis helps people who play avoid accident each other when they play as they play on both side and separate by a net.

Secondly

,

player

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players

the player

can play anytime they want, do not need to depend on others

for

example do

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example, do

jogging or fitness they can practice alone in the morning or after work.

Also it

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Also, it

helps people create a mental strength by working through

challenge

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challenges

the challenge

a challenge

, create personal mastery and do not

reliance

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rely

on others performance as they can focus on training needs and solve their personal weakness. Notwithstanding the aforementioned discussions my view is that playing sports as a

team

can provide more advantageous for people.

Team

sports helps people to connect with new friends, people that they do not know. Not just that, a

team

sport helps player in the

team

can build their

skills particularly

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skills, particularly

teamwork and help other people who are weaker in training or learn from

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

.

In addition

, it helps member

in

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of

the

team

share their emotion when a

team

win

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wins

or supporting each other when a

team

lost.

Finally

, playing a

team

sport helps people save their money for buying an equipment,

for example

the equipment for athlete play tennis is more expensive than play soccer,

also

the place to organize a match is

also

cheaper as people in a

team

together can pay the money for rent. For the foregoing arguments, it appears to me that playing in a

team

is more joyful and make more friends in the society.