Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

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Although
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the human brain
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same but their thinking might be different
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Some people are divided on the issue of mindset of friends
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Few opine that it is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
to select friend who always have same suggestion
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While
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
argue that it is conductive to have those
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who sometimes are not in favour of them
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The proponent
are
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is
in favour of those
friens
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
who have same thinking or decision which each other
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There are many benefits of having the
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common to or shared by two or more parties
mutual
mental
decision.
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preceding all others in time or space or degree
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better communication skills can be developed between both of them
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which would be productive

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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