People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

An ideal
society
is not
new phrase
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a new phrase
to anybody.
However
, there will not have any exact definition of an ideal
society
. It all depends on
individual’s point
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the individual’s point
of view. From my side, an ideal
society
should contain 03 things: equality,
freedom
and happiness. And in order to create an ideal
society
, it is undeniable that not only government, but each citizen should show their responsibility to their
society
also
.
Firstly
, equality is considered as the prerequisite for an ideal
society
. In that
society
, people are fairly treated no matter who they are and where they come from. All the human rights are fully protected and respected. An equal
society
will create a strong connection and improve growth and prosperity in the community.
Secondly
,
freedom
is play
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has played
plays
an important role in creating an ideal
society
. There will not have an ideal
society
without
freedom
-
freedom
of sovereignty, language, speech, thought, actions...And
last
but not least, happiness is one of the main factors which decide the
ideality
being twofold; a classification into two opposed parts or subclasses
duality
of that
society
. People say that the woman is the reflection of her men, the
society
is the same. If you want to know
this
society
is ideal or not, look at people, families and their community whether
happliness
state of well-being characterized by emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy
happiness
surrounds them. Loving, helping, caring and sharing are the way of happiness. The more we
share the
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share, the
more we have. It is a fact that many policy makers, management consultants & almost government had made their great effort to make an ideal
society
come true, but they failed most of the times. Personally, it is essential each government create a firm connection to the people in any matters to renovate the
society
because the final affected object is people living in that
society
and it is people who decide the existence, steady improvement and prosperity of a
society
.
Besides
, people in that
society
should respect the constitution and
law
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the law
, take their responsibilities as a standard citizen. People can do whatever they want, do it legally. In conclusion, we all
dream
of an ideal
society
, but
dream
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the dream
is always a
dream
, people are not successful to make
this
dream
come true.
Instead
of thinking about how to create an ideal
society
, think about how to make a better life for everyone.

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