You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Madam,
This
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is to inform you that the accommodation you provided is not as expected. I joined
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college
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last
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year and
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is my
second
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year in
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college
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.
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accommodation was pretty nice as it was inside the campus even. Am doing
graduation
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in
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of science in
IT
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department and am in my 3rd semester. There is some adjustment issue with
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current accommodation you provided.
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, am from China and my roommate is from India, we both have different taste and culture. The spices she uses makes the house smell so weird which makes me throw out sometimes.
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, the room is pretty far from
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, which is hard as we have mostly extra hours after the usual hours.
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, the room is not neat and clean- the kitchen drainage system is very bad, toilets
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a poor plumbing system and
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the water flow is very slow. And
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, not the least, the area is
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as we are getting distracted often because of the traffic noises. If you need
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details ,you can drop in by or
i
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can send you a detailed photograph through your email. And
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if you need any approvals from my head of department ,
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can send you a coping my principal and HOD about the same. I would prefer a silent place with minimum walking toward the
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. And
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I prefer some
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from China as our culture will be somewhat similar. Thank you. And hope to get a reply asap. Yours faithfully, Nora

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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