You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Madam,

This

is to inform you that the accommodation you provided is not as expected. I joined

this

college

last

year and

this

is my

second

year in

this

college

.

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accommodation was pretty nice as it was inside the campus even. Am doing

graduation

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in

bachelors

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of science in

IT

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department and am in my 3rd semester. There is some adjustment issue with

this

current accommodation you provided.

Firstly

, am from China and my roommate is from India, we both have different taste and culture. The spices she uses makes the house smell so weird which makes me throw out sometimes.

Secondly

, the room is pretty far from

college

, which is hard as we have mostly extra hours after the usual hours.

Thirdly

, the room is not neat and clean- the kitchen drainage system is very bad, toilets

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a poor plumbing system and

also

the water flow is very slow. And

last

, not the least, the area is

crowed

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as we are getting distracted often because of the traffic noises. If you need

further

details ,you can drop in by or

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can send you a detailed photograph through your email. And

also

if you need any approvals from my head of department ,

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can send you a coping my principal and HOD about the same. I would prefer a silent place with minimum walking toward the

College

. And

also

I prefer some

roommate

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from China as our culture will be somewhat similar. Thank you. And hope to get a reply asap. Yours faithfully, Nora