You stay over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. Thanks your friend. Describe your watch. Tell them what you want them to do.

#friend’s #house #weekend #thanks #friend

Hi Frank, How are you going? Thank you for your hospitality and for the effort you spent to arrange all fantastic things for our party

last

weekend. The excitement has been still along with me until now. I like the way you planned for it and how you brought it to life. Much appreciated! By the way, just a quick check that if you have found my watch left behind in the bedroom? It is a female- classic- Seiko watch which has a pink

facet

the front of the human head from the forehead to the chin and ear to ear

face

and a stainless steel bracelet. It’s not a fancy one, but I do look for it because it carries a sentimental memory which is indeed meaningful for me. Probably I was

hangover

having a hangover

hungover

, so forgot to grab it when leaving, and completely forgot where I had left it. The only think I’m sure is that it is not with me now. Could you please

therefore

help to keep your eyes on it and call me if you find it somewhere later? I will come and pick it up

then

. Many thanks and long to see your good news! Have a wonderful day! Thuy

Wed Nov 13 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You stay over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. Thanks your friend. Describe your watch. Tell them what you want them to do.

Fully explain your ideas

In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one’s own family. Is this a positive or negative development?

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many people think that technology creates significant impact in the modern word? Do you agree with this statement?