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The Internet has transformed lives and economies, but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Since the moment of existing,
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 has gradually changed our life and influenced the economies all over the world.
However
, it is thought that
worldwide
Suggestion
the world wide web
world wide web
web
 makes our world an infinite territory where people have an identical thoughts and conduct. In my opinion, Internet considerably erases a lot of boards and differences between people
thus
 making the individuals
identical
Suggestion
identified
identity
.
Firstly
,
worldwide
Suggestion
world wide
web
 has its own specific language which is common for every
participant regardless
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participant, regardless
 of location, occupation, interests and thereby eliminates all possible barriers. In real life, every person has its
personal
Suggestion
personality
 traits and peculiarities which distinguish him or her from the others.
However
, in
web
 area people from all parts of our planet adhere to the Internet rules and communicate by means of the unified parlance.
Thus
, those who are involved in
web
 life, whether or not, compose the
web
 community where all individuals are equal and behave themselves the same way.
Secondly
, it became possible to work for a company which is located abroad through the
web
 space and
therefore
 impacting a lot of economies. The illustration of
such
 online work can be observed in
India whose
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India, whose
 IT specialists are employed by a lot of international companies. In spite of the fact that Indian employees work for foreign
companies they still
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companies, they still
 bring significant income into
domestic economy
Suggestion
the domestic economy
.
Moreover
, because of
such
 a way of hiring workers an unemployment rate among own IT specialists in the USA and Canada, which are the major online employers, slightly increases. So, it becomes more than obvious that
worldwide
Suggestion
the world wide web
world wide web
web
 causes an evident change in international economies. To sum up, I am inclined to believe that
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
, no matter what benefits it comprise in itself, defeats all bounds and distinctions. Whilst using the world of
web
 area,
persons lose
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persons, lose
 the personal features and
interflow
 into a single
web
 society.

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