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To what extent has the traditional male role changed in the last 20 years? Many people believe that women make better parenting than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.

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People have different perspectives on the
role
 of parents in bringing up children. While some thought that the mothers are best in raising children, others argue that the fathers are equally important as their counterpart. In my opinion, I consider that females are responsible to instill social values and males should educate children about
skills
Suggestion
the skills
 required to live with satisfaction as their
role
 has changed a lot within
last couple
Suggestion
the last couple
 of decades. In the following paragraphs,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 shall put forth some arguments
ro
in the direction of
to
 support my view. One of the main reasons why both partners should play their critical
role
 in
development
Suggestion
the development
 of their offsprings is that children take them as their
role
 models.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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