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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives . What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce the pressure?

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Minors in every part of the world are handed immense pressure these days due to schooling
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socializing and commercial part of
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the view
.It is unfair that these innocent minds have to undergo
such
 phases in a very little age.
Firstly
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe the teaching pattern in schools has played a major role in the
occurence
an event that happens
occurrence
 of
such
 pressure conditions.The
curicculum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
curriculums
curricula
 in schools
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mid term exams
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homeworks
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completions
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have forced students to focus on their studies
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even if they are not in a condition to study mentally.But knowing what circumstances can occur if the work is left incomplete
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students push themselves and complete the work given at any cost.
This
 has led to a decrease in
playtime
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the playtime
 of students, and eventually having no physical activity in their daily routines.
Although
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having a social life is considered essential
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but due to the schooling time table it has not gone very well.Students have started to feel lonely as the work schedule has made them spend less time with friends
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family etc.
childrens
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Children
Childrens
 have started to acknowledge the lack of communication
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which has made them less familiar with commercial skills.They have started to lack the
skillset
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skill set
 needed for commercial means.Over pampering can
also
 play a leading role in
occurence
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the occurrence
occurrence
 of
such
 lacking skills. To conclude
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I should say children should be taught to resolve
such
 tense conditions by their parents themselves.Every aspect should be given equal importance
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and not just academics should be prioritized.Physical activities and proper guidance should be provided in the school itself.
This
 shall help students cope up with the speed of society and
adopt
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
 to the surroundings.
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