prevention is better than cure. researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.to what extend do u agree or disagree ?

It is often argued that the government should invest the capital in finding the preventative measures while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that all preventative measures would not be effective all
time
. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that preventative measures should be given priority than finding the cure for diseases.
This
essay will discuss why investment should be done in preventative measures.
Firstly
, finding the remedies for diseases would be expensive and
time
consuming. For a certain drug of its respective
disease
, experiment and research are crucial.
Similarly
, for the experiment, the apparatus required will cost more and
also
it requires certain
time
to achieve
final result
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the final result
a final result
final results
.
This
may causes
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may cause
loss of human lives vastly.
For instance
, in some parts of Nepal, when diarrhoea was introduced
firstly
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firstly, then
then
it increased rapidly in all people and became an epidemic
disease
. In that situation, lots of people died because of
diarrhoea but
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diarrhoea, but
its antibiotics were found only after a year. So,
instead
of finding cures, if the capital was invested in preventative measures- which is
short and reliable method
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a short and reliable method
, people would not have to loss their life.
On the other hand
, all the medicines cannot cure
disease
completely.
In other words
, all the
experiment
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experiments
and research will not give positive results. So people have always a fear of recurring the
disease
even after taking antibiotics.
This
will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
their mental health and eventually it ends up with depression. Some of the drugs only help to
supress
to put down by force or authority
suppress
the activity of
virus
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the virus
instead
of destroying it completely.
For example
, there are some antibiotic of
hiv
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HIV
virus that only
supresses
to put down by force or authority
suppresses
suppress
the gene's activities but cannot kill it. So, there will be always a fear inside
a
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an
hiv
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HIV
hive
infected patient that he cannot be cured fully. In
this
way, preventive measures should be given in
time
so that no one will suffer from any kind of diseases. In conclusion, researching and treating
disease
will be
unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
affordable
and
time
consuming.
That is
why, people should be aware about the certain
harmness
any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.
harms
hormones
to their health by providing preventative measures that helps them to live a healthy
time
.

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