prevention is better than cure. researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.to what extend do u agree or disagree ?
It is often argued that the government should invest the capital in finding the preventative measures while
other
think that all preventative measures would not be effective all plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
time
. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that preventative measures should be given priority than finding the cure for diseases. This
essay will discuss why investment should be done in preventative measures.
Firstly
, finding the remedies for diseases would be expensive and time
consuming. For a certain drug of its respective disease
, experiment and research are crucial. Similarly
, for the experiment, the apparatus required will cost more and also
it requires certain time
to achieve final result
.Suggestion
the final result
a final result
final results
This
may causes
loss of human lives vastly. Suggestion
may cause
For instance
, in some parts of Nepal, when diarrhoea was introduced firstly
Accept comma addition
firstly, then
then
it increased rapidly in all people and became an epidemic disease
. In that situation, lots of people died because of diarrhoea but
its antibiotics were found only after a year. So, Accept comma addition
diarrhoea, but
instead
of finding cures, if the capital was invested in preventative measures- which is short and reliable method
, people would not have to loss their life.
Suggestion
a short and reliable method
On the other hand
, all the medicines cannot cure disease
completely. In other words
, all the experiment
and research will not give positive results. So people have always a fear of recurring the Suggestion
experiments
disease
even after taking antibiotics. This
will effect
their mental health and eventually it ends up with depression. Some of the drugs only help to have an effect upon
affect
supress
the activity of to put down by force or authority
suppress
virus
Suggestion
the virus
instead
of destroying it completely. For example
, there are some antibiotic of hiv
virus that only Suggestion
HIV
supresses
the gene's activities but cannot kill it. So, there will be always a fear inside to put down by force or authority
suppresses
suppress
a
Suggestion
an
hiv
infected patient that he cannot be cured fully. In Suggestion
HIV
hive
this
way, preventive measures should be given in time
so that no one will suffer from any kind of diseases.
In conclusion, researching and treating disease
will be unaffordable
and impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
affordable
time
consuming. That is
why, people should be aware about the certain harmness
to their health by providing preventative measures that helps them to live a healthy any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.
harms
hormones
time
.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!