prevention is better than cure. researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.to what extend do u agree or disagree ?

It is often argued that the government should invest the capital in finding the preventative measures while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that all preventative measures would not be effective all

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. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that preventative measures should be given priority than finding the cure for diseases.

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essay will discuss why investment should be done in preventative measures.

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, finding the remedies for diseases would be expensive and

time

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consuming. For a certain drug of its respective

disease

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, experiment and research are crucial.

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, for the experiment, the apparatus required will cost more and

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it requires certain

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to achieve

final result

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the final result

a final result

final results

.

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may causes

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may cause

loss of human lives vastly.

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, in some parts of Nepal, when diarrhoea was introduced

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firstly

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firstly, then

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it increased rapidly in all people and became an epidemic

disease

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. In that situation, lots of people died because of

diarrhoea but

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diarrhoea, but

its antibiotics were found only after a year. So,

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of finding cures, if the capital was invested in preventative measures- which is

short and reliable method

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a short and reliable method

, people would not have to loss their life.

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, all the medicines cannot cure

disease

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completely.

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, all the

experiment

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experiments

and research will not give positive results. So people have always a fear of recurring the

disease

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even after taking antibiotics.

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will

effect

have an effect upon

affect

their mental health and eventually it ends up with depression. Some of the drugs only help to

supress

to put down by force or authority

suppress

the activity of

virus

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the virus

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of destroying it completely.

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, there are some antibiotic of

hiv

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HIV

virus that only

supresses

to put down by force or authority

suppresses

suppress

the gene's activities but cannot kill it. So, there will be always a fear inside

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an

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HIV

hive

infected patient that he cannot be cured fully. In

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way, preventive measures should be given in

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so that no one will suffer from any kind of diseases. In conclusion, researching and treating

disease

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will be

unaffordable

impossible to avoid or evade

unavoidable

affordable

and

time

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consuming.

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why, people should be aware about the certain

harmness

any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.

harms

hormones

to their health by providing preventative measures that helps them to live a healthy

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