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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individual to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individual make, some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #government #action
Every individual is responsible for solving the environmental problem. Every individual must do their part in solving the environmental problems, but only individuals being responsible without the efforts of
government
 doesn't provide any vast range in solving the environmental problems. The major environmental problems today are pollution
,
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,
global warming etc.
Firstly
, the
government
 must take proper measures and create awareness programs in decreasing the pollution levels in major cities, and the public must
also
 abide by the rules. The
government
 must perform proper checks on the
industries see
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industries, see
 that they are
realeasing
emotionally purging (of e.g. art)
releasing
realizing
 the factory wastes after processing or not, performing beach clean up programs etc. As an individual we must do our part to the mother earth by travelling through public transports, avoiding
vechiles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
 for shorter distances. If the public and
government
 could work in
such
 coordination
then
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than
 we could easily solve the environmental issues. Planting trees can help
reducing
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reduce
 global warming, spending our leisure time in
such
 activities can help solve environmental problems. According to my
opinion neither
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opinion, neither
 the public nor the
government
 can solve the environmental problems alone without the help of one another. Both the public and
government
 must work together
.
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.

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