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Some young people are leaving the country to anothers, leaving only old people in the country. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

#people #country #anothers #situation
In the contemporary world unemployment increased constantly.
certain
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Certain
 youngsters people are moving to the foreign for higher education. In the
country
 leaving only older people.There are many causes behind it in upcoming fragments and how to solve
this
 issue.
To begin
 with, a few years ago individuals well educated in the
country
 and they get success in
career field
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a career field
the career field
career fields
.
secondly
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Secondly
, the population is not higher than
modern world
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the modern world
.
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.
Every person doing jobs like as
teacher
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a teacher
,
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,
Doctor
,
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,
lawyers
so on
in the near future
soon
.They gain job easily.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
, pupils follow western cultural and they
looking
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look
are looking
 beautiful in the society. It is bad impact on young people and they
do not living
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don't live
do not live
are not living
aren't living
have not lived
haven't lived
 in own
country
 because there are lack of job opportunities and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 facilities. Many people are more
educated but
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educated, but
 they do not work in the society. Adults prefer to abroad and
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their dreams.
Moreover
,
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,
many differences study about between India and overseas countries. In the foreign, teachers doing practical work. By
this
,
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,
dwellers gain confidence and experience from their skills. The corruption growing regularly.
Moreover
, only parents and grandparents living behind in home.The foreign facilities and better education system attracted to the young generation.Because government do not cooperate with ordinary individuals. By
this
,
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,
youth indulged in the bad companies like as drug dose.
However
,
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,
Authorities should in the schools and
colleges
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college
 teachers learning study
to
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of
 children well understood. Many interesting activities related to the study doing in the schools every day. By
this
,
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,
student
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the student
a student
create
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creates
 their interest in different skills. Government should motivate to the students and providing part time job in the companies. By
this
,
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,
they earn money and confidence.
Furthermore
, they do not move to the other nations and they
living
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live
are living
 with
family
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the family
 without any stress. To conclude, after analysing all the aspects it is
clear
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clearly
 seen that the crucial responsibility for young people future as well in their
country
.
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.
It is
negative development
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a negative development
 for
country
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the country
 and
this
 trend beneficial
for
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in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 countries.
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