Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and discuss your opinion.

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FEW DECADES SOCIETIES AT LARGE HAVE WITNESSED TREMENDOUS GROWTH AND REVOLUTIONARY CHANGES HAVE BEEN THE CORNERSTONE OF

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MULTIFACETED PROGRESS. IT MAY NOT BE A HYPERBLE TO STATE THAT EDUCATIONAL

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HAS BEEN A CORE ELEMENT AND AN INVIOLABLE SUBSET OF

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MATRIX OF PROGRESS. IN

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CONTEXT SOME PEOPLE BELIVE THAT

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EDUACTIONAL

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IS BUILD UP BY A GOOD

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. BUT THE OTHERS ARGUE THAT NOT ONLY A GOOD TECHER BUT

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STUDENT

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'S ATTITUDE IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR

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ESSAY SHALL LOOK AT THE BRIGHTER AND SEAMIER ASPECTS OF THE ISSUE AND ARGUE THAT BENEFIT OF EDUCATIONAL

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FAR OUTWEIGH ANY MEAGER DRAWBACK IT MAY PROFER. A QUICK PERUSAL OF THE ISSUE AT HAND WOULD THROW UP A SURFEIT OF SEMIAL REASONS SUPPORTING SOME PEOPLE PERSPECTIVE THAT ONLY GOOD

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CAN PROVIDE EDUCATIONAL

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A GOOD GUIDE provides proper guidance

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as the right learning materials, periodic assessments and tips IN ORDER TO ATTAIN

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IN THEIR EXAMS. THE PROPONENTS OF

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VIEW

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FEEL THAT

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there are many coaching institutes, which have qualified professors to teach young aspirants to crack the competitive exams and most of them succeed too. TO TOP IT ALL

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IT IS THEIR CONTENTION THAT

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TEACHER

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CANNOT CONTROLL ALL STUENTS IN THEIR CLASS ROOM.SOME TIMES THEY DISPLAY AN ATTITUDE OF DISSENT AND THEY REJECT SOME STUDENTS.

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, IF WE ARE HONEST ABUT IT, WE MIGHT ACKNOWLEDGGE THAT IF GOOD TEACHERS WERE ATLEAST HALF AS EFFECTIVE AS IT CLAIMED TO BE IN ACADEMIC

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SOME INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL CHOOSE SMART AND EFFICIENT TEACHERS FOR THEIR STUDENTS. THEY WORK VERY HARD ALONG WITH CHILDREN TO CATCH UP THE SUCESS.IN

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WAY ALL THE STUDENTS TRY TO FOCUS ON THEIR STUDIES

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ON THE CONTRARY

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ANECDOTAL EVIDENCES AND MANY LONGITUDINAL STUDIES SUGGEST THAT ACCADEMICAL ACHIEVEMENTS AND

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RATES ANYTHING BUT GOING DOWN

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WHICH INDICATES THE INEFFECTIVENESS OF THE WHOLE MEASURE. IN MY ARSENAL OF ARGUMENTS SUPPORTING THE PERSPECTIVE THAT STUDENTS ATTENTION IS THE MAIN THING TO ATTAIN

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ONE OF THE MOST POTENT IS THAT

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STUDENT

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SHOULD HAVE AN ABILITY TO FOCUS IN THEIR STUDIES ESPECIALLY AT THE TIME OF EXAMS. UPTODATE LEARNING BUILD A GOOD

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WITH GREAT

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MOREOVER

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STUDENTS CAN EARN A HIGH SCORE WITH THE SUPPORT OF THEIR

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ADDITIONALLY

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PROVIDING SUCCOR TO MY LINE OF REASONING ARE THE VARIOUS REASERCH TOPICS WHICH SHOW A SIGNIFICANT CORRELATION BETWEEN STUDENTS AND TEACHERS

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I WOULD OPINE THAT EDUCATIONAL

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IS BUILD UP BY NOT ONLY A GOOD

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BUT

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STUDENT

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WITH FOCUS

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ATTENTION AND SKILLS. HAVING CONSIDERNING BOTH SIDES, IT SEEMS EVER SO SENSIBLE TO REGISTER MY DISAGREEMENT WITH THE STATEMENT THAT A GOOD

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IS THE ONLY WAY FOR GETTING

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. IN SPITE OF THE INTRICATE TAPESTRY OF ARGUMENTS DELICATELY WOVEN IN FAVOUR OF A GOOD COACH OR

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IT SEEMS UNCONVINCING TO MY PSYCHE ON A SUB TEXTUAL BASIS. IT IS

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EVIDENT THAT WHILE THE DOWNSIDES TO GOOD TEACHERS ARE TANGIBLE

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PROFOUND AND ENORMOUSLY CONSEQUENTAL THE BENEFIT ARE EPHEMERAL, SUPERFICIL AND BEYOND A POINT CEASE TO BEPALPABLE IN THE LONG RUN. SUFFICE IT TO SAY THAT

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A GOOD

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CAN BUILD UP SOME ACADEMIC CREDIT BUT THERE ARE SOME LIMITS TO GET MORE

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