Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most peoples lives.others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilites . Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that the most fulfilling stage of a person's life is during adolescence

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while others believe that adulthood

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despite things like

job

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family and money concerns, is better.

This

essay agrees with

former

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the former

, rather than the

later

referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)

latter

veiw

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

view

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It will

first

dicuss

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

how grown -ups are much less fulfilled than teenagers because of pressures they are under and discuss how contented most teenagers are

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before coming to the conclusion that the ages thirteen to eighteen really are the best years of our lives. Upon reaching maturity people are expected to fend for themselves and

this

often leads to unhappiness.

This

is because most adults have rent and bills to pay

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as well as a partner and dependents to look after

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which more often than not

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leads to them doing a

job

they don't enjoy in exchange

formoney

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for money

.A recent study in Queen's university

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Belfast found that 79

percent

of people would leave their

job

they

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They

didn't have a mortgage and 64

percent

of people said that their

job

made them depressed at some point.

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young

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

are free from these worries because they are often supported financially and free from any real troubles.Most live with their parents who pay for all their needs and the only thing that they have to focus on is studying.Research carried out by Cambridge University found that only 29

percent

of 15 -16 year old students said they were 'happy 'but when questioned 10 years later 84

percent

said that they were 'much happier' when they were 16. In conclusion youth really is wasted on the young because older people are under much more strain when it comes to money and people relying on them.

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Fully explain your ideas

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