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You have had a class discussion on the importance of public libraries. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries? Write your composition.

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There are a lot of ways of getting information nowadays.
That is
 why some people think that public libraries are not necessary in the modern era. Anyway, there are supporters of
book
 places, who are convinced that nothing can be more informative than a true
book
's
pages
Suggestion
page
. Let us discuss those two opinions on the subject. From the
first
 point of view, we have many advantages of using network
instead
 of going to the library. We can find useful information sitting at home, which obviously would be pretty much faster than trying to look for the chapter you need in a 500 page
book
. From the other point, the internet is, of course, a very convenient thing. But nothing can replace the library's atmosphere and specific pleasure you get reading through the paper pages, feeling it's smell and a special story of exact
book
. One way or another, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages in both cases.
That is
 why everyone should choose himself: "books or websites?"

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