Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
A growing number of felonies can be observed every year. There are a few causes to
this
matter and consequences in the long term. Linking Words
However
, it is possible to design strategies to minimise the issues caused by high rates of crime. I will discuss some of the origins to misconduct and possible prevention methods.
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causes of crime is poverty and lack of opportunities. Linking Words
Moreover
, people in poverty find it difficult to access good quality education in a capitalist system, Linking Words
hence
becoming more vulnerable and often getting caught in a vicious circle from which it is quite difficult to emerge. Linking Words
For instance
, if someone is in debt and unemployed, Linking Words
this
person will resort to extreme measures Linking Words
such
as robbing to alleviate immediate needs, whereas someone that has been properly educated will think twice before committing a felony.
A possible solution to Linking Words
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problem would be to have better access to education. Linking Words
However
, it is extremely important to strengthen laws and raise awareness to respect government institutions. Linking Words
Instead
of just caring for the number of law-enforcement resources, it can be more useful to implement campaigns to fight off increased criminal behaviours. Linking Words
Although
it may sound harsh, people need to learn the consequences of breaking the law, Linking Words
for example
, speeding tickets are constantly given to people that make up excuses and avoid following the rules.
In conclusion, it is worrying that criminal activity is on the rise every year. Linking Words
This
is an area of opportunity for governments to improve access to better education, which is the cornerstone to overcome extreme poverty. Linking Words
Furthermore
, law-enforcement agents should be part of campaigns delivered to the people, promoting respect to institutions.Linking Words
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