You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter on behalf of the
jazz
crossroad group in reply to your notice given to us for using the community hall on Tuesday and Friday evenings. We are a group of passionate
jazz
musicians and
artists
who in our spare time practice
jazz
in the community hall. As you might be aware that
jazz
as an art form is in decline, especially in our city. As an effort to keep our
jazz
roots alive and breathing few of us in the early 2000s came together and initiated
this
group and started
practicing
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. We welcome new and upcoming
artists
in the community and support them in their musical journey. Children of all ages
enroll
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for guitar, saxophone, and trumpet classes in the summer vacation.
Artists
from all
corner
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corners
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of the city come here to practice, grow and inspire each other.
This
hall has become a hub for several
artists
. In conclusion, we would like to know if there is any chance to reschedule and utilize the space some other day
for
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example, Monday and Wednesday evenings or Saturday and Sunday evenings. Do let us know if
this
works for you as we would like to come to some sort of a mutual arrangement. Yours sincerely, Deependra Singh

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