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Government should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the general public. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that sports and arts play a very crucial role in
development
Suggestion
the development
 of a nation. While it is
opine
Suggestion
opined
 that, council authorities should motivate school children to learn sports and art activities,
however they
Accept comma addition
however, they
 should not encourage the professional aspect of these skills. I do not completely agree with either of these perspectives and will support my explanation with relevant examples. On the one hand, students should be encouraged to participate in these skills for their growth and development.
This
 is because, learners should have autonomy to choose, which help them to acknowledge new dimensions of their life.
For example
, according to a report published by the UK newspaper in 2011, highlighted the
neuro
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Neuro
narrow
- cognitive development of these students who were involved in skills like sports or arts (music, painting, dancing).
In contrast
, a strict supervision should be done on children so that they do not over indulge and loose concentration from academics.
As a result
, they would perform
mediocrely
ordinariness as a consequence of being average and not outstanding
mediocrity
 in both aspects of life.
On the other hand
, I believe
Buroaucrates
an official of a bureaucracy
bureaucrats
 should motivate the professional aspect of these skills. The reason is that, it would create a sense of patriotism as well as generate revenue, which would help in boosting economy of a country.
For instance
, in my own experience, I am a professional tennis player and have received tremendous accolades and financial benefits due to
this
.
As a result
, I donate
this
 amount for the welfare of my state.
However
, the
atheletes
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
 should not exploit
this
 gift for their personal benefits.
Therefore
, I believe whether these skills are encouraged at school or professional level, personality and environmental factors play an important role in choosing how to utilize these gifts. In conclusion, while it is beneficial to encourage school learners to learn sports and arts, I believe it should
also
 be promoted professionally to lead them to a path of success.
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