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The treat of nuclear power weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It has been argued that the invention of nuclear technology has more advantages than disadvantages, as it's not only a source of cheap energy, but the nuclear weapons have
also
 maintained peace worldwide. In my opinion, I agree with
this
, as it all depends upon the way of usage like generation of electricity and ensuring a peaceful environment are beneficial for mankind. On the one hand, the main purpose of advancement in the field of nuclear science was to produce an atomic bomb for the future battlefield. Later on, it was realised that it's so much destructive that it has made generations crippled.
This
 led to a creation of a belief that its dangerous for our future siblings and an idea to abandon its use became famous. Now, it's a treaty signed by all the nuclear nations that they will not use
this
 devastating weapon at any cost.
This
, ultimately, has ensured peace all over the globe.
For example
, the creation of the United Nations was
also
 to prevent war and ensure tranquility all around.
On the other hand
, peaceful people devised ways to use
this
 technique for creation of energy which is not only cheap but
also
 environmental friendly.
Firstly
, the power generated from a nuclear reaction costs less than the hydroelectric or oil generated electricity.
Secondly
, it's more clean and maintain the air pollution free.
Furthermore
, it
also
 provides an alternate source of as well.
For instance
, the Russians are at the top in utilising nuclear resources for the betterment of mankind. To conclude, it's rightly said and I believe that the outcome of an experiment depends upon its future usage, like the world has become peaceful and has
also
 overcome the crises of energy shortage, by correct usage of nuclear reactors.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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