Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Arguing whether the

government

should use

money

for the arts or use it for other things is a vital concern of society. Some visionaries, including the speaker, speak a world in which the spending

money

on the arts from the

government

is

wast

unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

vast

wasted

worst

and it should be used to do other things. In

this

essay, I will explain the reason why I agree with the speaker’s

idea

with the opposite

idea

. At a glance, the

idea

that investing of the

government

for

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in

the arts is useful seems reasonable. The arts are one form of cultures, so that they should be protected. People can learn the past cultures from Statues and pictures.

For instance

, in Japan, the

government

spends much

money

on statues of Japanese Gods and Ukiyoe, a Japanese type picture, to save them for descendants to experience Japanese old cultures.

However

,

this

investment is

only reasonable only

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only reasonable

when all citizens are wealthy. In the real situation, there are some poor citizens, and so the

government

should use much

money

to rescue them,

in stead

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of the arts. The chief reason of my assertion is as follows: the

government

should spend

money

to save the poverties, because the main aim of the

government

is to mitigate the current citizen’s life, not to protect the arts. The

government

should make

saftey

the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions

safety

nets,

supplies work

Accept comma addition

supplies, work

training programs and

then

support non-workers to obtain new jobs.

For example

, in 20 century, Japanese

government

constructed a

safty

the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions

safety

nets

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net

system to save poor Japanese citizens, and for them, it offered work trainings and helped them to get a new occupation. In sum, I would like to stress that speaker’s

idea

- the

government

spending on the arts is

wast

unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

vast

worst

wasted

and it should be used for other things- is reasonable, since the purpose of the

government

is for its citizens to have

better life

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a better life

better lives

.

Therefore

, I agree with the

idea

and I believe that spending

money

on poor people will ameliorate the country in the future.